So yeah, i've been working with those scripts for my series project, and, yeah, idk, i was hoping to get some feedback.
Yeah, idk if it's cool, okey, or it's shit, idk, just asking to you guys.
Mechatropic - Pilot episode (It was based from The Sweet Sixteen comic i made!)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T6iB10kexiodXGvQ3CmpQ9bvlTcIcTSux0KlmBEtssg/edit?usp=sharing
Mechatropic - The unnecessary and ridiculous beach episode
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T_zJ9Y9prX9CLyAep1Sv2Z1gj5lnmueD83nFv4UOyYs/edit?usp=sharing
Also, for the "Next episode preview" are some ideas for episodes. I'll see if i make those ideas a real thing but yeah
Also i forgot to mention, some of the characters i haven't show yet show up here so yeah lol
DezimGames
I really liked what you got so far dude! Some parts felt like a Spongebob episode and I'm totally here for it, had some good laughs reading it too!
(also, the d00d from the beach episode needs to become a major plot character just sayin)
BlueKnightSkeleton (Updated )
We'll see if fate is merciful to the d00d.